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When you need it most |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Ears scarred closed, eyes down turned, heart heavy, filled with too many of yesterday's tears. Futility finds my hands working overtime to silence the reverberations. In times as these, when just a single uplifting word, would revive, God breathes reassuring words into the mind of one who will give them voice- You are beautiful (my child). Don't let anyone tell you differently. Embarrassment would hide my unworthiness, but appreciation for the voice of kindness, reaches out with a smile and the warmth quickly radiates inward. All that needs be said now is thank you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and your words are indeed beautiful... so I thank you for sharing them... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
your poem as always was wonderful...i have missed you...helen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice way to put it...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but, "thank you" doesn't seem enough, when put as well as this... thank you. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Embarrassment would hide my unworthiness, but appreciation for the voice of kindness, reaches out with a smile and the warmth quickly radiates inward. All that needs be said now is thank you. " and thank you for this, oh thank you! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
These words are blessed with wisdom. Very wonderfully expressed. I am thankful you wrote them. Sincerely, Regina |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I understand the futility reference. Busy-ness sometimes is like a bandage. Thanks, jellybeans. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
came back for another read, others should read this again, it's worthy, so worthy. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've been God's voice to me so many times. Thank YOU, dear friend... I owe you big time. Oh, yeah... and the poem is great, too! *G* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyBeans~ Oh ... this is sooooooooo good. Thanks, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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