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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-03 01:59 PM



Love Unmasked….


Arresting inflections
gingerly caress me to your will…
held by a gaze
which views my soul,
I am naked and exposed

Love unmasked, I am revealed
living and breathing
in the quiet knowing
of your heart…


10-03-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-10-03 04:00 PM


WhispersCaress~

'Love unmasked, I am revealed
living and breathing
in the quiet knowing
of your heart…'


This is lovely~
~*Marge*~

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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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2 posted 2001-10-03 04:02 PM


This is just gorgeous!!! I can feel the passion and love in this! well done!  
Cindi

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-10-03 09:17 PM


Ladies,
thank you, this one was truly from the heart.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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4 posted 2001-10-04 04:39 PM


very lovely verse indeed!
A Whisper's Caress
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5 posted 2001-10-04 10:10 PM


Lady of shallot,
thank you, I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.

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