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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.

0 posted 2001-10-03 01:41 PM



Do you finally see me
Do I fill your senses
Can you relax now
Has it come to pass
After all this time
Eyes clear, fog lifted
Look, it's me
Older, wiser, but still me
Bruised, Not broken
Am I, me, finally in there
Do you see, me


Connie McDonald

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2001-10-03 02:54 PM


All one has to do to see..is look with their heart as well as their eyes...


Nicely done...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-03 02:57 PM


In your words we do see....nicely done.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Zinsser
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-10-03 03:11 PM


Cpat and Spirit.... Thank You both very much
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