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Open Poetry #16

Stir My Soul

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2001-10-03 01:37 PM

Some how you stir my soul
I feel your wisdom
Of all the yester years
Holding too, the hope
Of all tomorrows
Fill me full
Of the strength I sense
In your monthly
Full moon presence

By
Connie McDonald

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-10-03 02:20 PM

Very Nice, I like this,
the title snaps images into place.

“Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.”

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-03 02:27 PM

Connie, I did indeed enjoy this! Nice images mixed with the stirring of the soul. Thank you! *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-10-03 02:47 PM

yes..tight imagery and nice mixture of metaphysical... I enjoyed!

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-10-03 03:14 PM

Humble Thanks to you All : )

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-10-03 04:52 PM

Well said with great images and phrases!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2001-10-03 05:23 PM

Thanks Melissa : )
~Connie~

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