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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-03 12:41 PM


The sun rises over a mountain view
trees glisten with the morning dew,
a pallet of colors within my sight
vibrant hues bled through dawning light.

Oranges and reds painting the skies
beautiful image beheld within my eyes,
a moment to linger before going my way
a prayer said, Thank you God for this day.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-03-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-10-03 01:31 PM


Yes, morning horizons can be so beautiful
You pictured them well

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-03 01:36 PM


Gentle Spirit,

A beautiful poem to welcome the dawning of a new day. Well done!   hugs, Marie

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-10-03 01:48 PM


Titia, I write them as I see them!  Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-10-03 01:48 PM


Marie, it was a beautiful dawn at that!  Thank you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

walker
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5 posted 2001-10-03 04:42 PM


Lovely
Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-10-03 04:44 PM



Perfection!    Amen to that!
And, I'm sure that God smiles with your thank you~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-10-03 04:53 PM


Thank you walker.  *s*  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2001-10-03 04:54 PM


Melissa, thank you very much for such an enthusiastic reply.  I appreciate it!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

vandana
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9 posted 2001-10-03 05:44 PM


nice
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2001-10-03 08:58 PM


Thank you Vandana.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
11 posted 2001-10-03 11:26 PM


Serenly beautiful tapestry you paint with your words.  I enjoyed your painting very much!
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-10-04 08:16 AM


I'm glad you enjoyed the view SE.  Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

The Lady of Shallot
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13 posted 2001-10-04 03:07 PM


these images lifted my spirit today, thank you!
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-10-10 03:06 PM


So glad to have been of assistance!  I am pleased that you enjoyed the view.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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