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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2001-10-03 12:15 PM


Based on an actual experience....still haven't firgured it out but I sure wish I had my camera that day!!!


What a mystery
but there they were
covering a fresh fallen snow
as if a creature
had discovered
the wet cold for the first time
prancing through front yards
darting through back lawns
scurrying here and there
and they would change
and I wonder for a moment
what could make these
footprints in the snow
and I surmised that it must be
something really strange...

Just me BREAKING FREE of the manifestations of MAN, cut the cords one by one, finding no understanding except from the most divine one, it's happening

[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 10-03-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-10-03 07:32 PM


I really like the picture that you show here. . .

the idea that something made footprints. . . and that you can't identify it. . . really makes you think. . . were they first steps??

great job. . .

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JamesBowie
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2 posted 2001-10-03 07:36 PM


I like your ideas and writing style, so frre. good read J
cpalmer
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3 posted 2001-10-03 08:25 PM


I love it! nice style
Cindi

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4 posted 2001-10-03 08:28 PM


Very enjoyable!  Good writing and imagery.

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So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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5 posted 2001-10-03 10:45 PM



I'll have whatever you're drinking, JulieAnn!

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6 posted 2001-10-03 11:17 PM


Hi JulieAnn,

I like it!
I believe there are "things" out there that we don't understand.
Life is always a mystery.
I love to challenge my mind!

I also think you are adorable!

Vince

"Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman

Alan
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7 posted 2001-10-03 11:51 PM


I like this. you have a wonderful style
alan

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8 posted 2001-10-04 07:04 AM


JulieAnn~
Wonderful thoughts to share.
Good to see you~
~*Marge*~

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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
9 posted 2001-10-04 03:21 PM


thank you! thank you! one and all....
I am glad to be back and thought I would make an entrance...glad you all liked it!

Just me BREAKING FREE of the manifestations of MAN, cut the cords one by one, finding no understanding except from the most divine one, it's happening

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