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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-10-03 08:16 AM



morning moon sleep now
solitary star shall soothe
singing lullabies

~*~

morning star so blessed
to see both orbs in your realm
kiss them both for me

~*~

daybreak greeting night
a shift of timing through space
bless us quietly


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-10-03 08:40 AM


Karilea~

I love this~

'morning star so blessed
to see both orbs in your realm
kiss them both for me'


Such a comforting thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2001-10-03 08:51 AM


yes, very comforting...

regards to you Karilea,
Sudhir

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3 posted 2001-10-03 09:09 AM


watching the full moon over the pararie again? nicely done....
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4 posted 2001-10-03 09:13 AM


Sunshine,
You shine bright today. *L*

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5 posted 2001-10-03 09:23 AM



Wonderful haikus!  

I love the alliteration in the first, well done!  

Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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6 posted 2001-10-03 02:37 PM


You have captured our morning greeting so eloquently.  Would you not also speak of our evening waltz as we invite you earth dwellers to rest and recreate?

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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7 posted 2001-10-03 02:42 PM


Beautifully shining today you are Sunshine.  Wonderful write.   *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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8 posted 2001-10-21 07:31 AM


Marge, thank you so much for picking out a favored verse...

and regards to you, Sudhir...it is good to see your name again...

Captain...always....thank you....

Seymour, I try to light when I can...thank you my friend...

Melybee, thank you so much...

Lunatic, I shall see what the moon will bring...

Thank you Gentle Spirit...I am always glad when you can come in to read...

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9 posted 2001-10-25 08:19 PM


Ooops, BTTT
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10 posted 2001-10-25 08:53 PM


Sushine..so lovely, you and your poetry!
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11 posted 2001-10-25 09:10 PM




(smiles) Such beautiful sunshine dawns across your beautiful words, sweet Karilea! (smiles) The lullabies and spirit of daylight sing in your heart, sweet friend! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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