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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-10-02 06:07 PM


                “KISSING YOUR TEARS”
                                by
                            Bill Charles
                               ~~~~
One tear of sadness, flowed down your lovely face,
        another behind it,
                from both gentle eyes…
I kissed them with my lips, which still belong to you,
        and when I felt the moistness,
                I could only agonize…

Not knowing where you have been, from then to now,
        for it has been it seems,
                a very long time ago…
Since we held each other, with warmth and affection,
        but then suddenly nothing,
                each heart pierced with an arrow…

I remember the closeness, as we shared,
        all of the happiness,
                every day full of sunshine…
So I would kiss each tear of yours, that I can see,
        for yesterday your soft lips touched,
                all that was mine…
                               ~~~~



[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 10-02-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-10-02 06:09 PM


wonderful BC. . .

you always make it look so easy. . .  

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-10-02 07:13 PM



        for yesterday your soft lips touched,
                all that was mine…


as only you can write  *s   many wonderful thoughts come from this...thank you Bill hugsssss
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-10-02 07:30 PM


This is very sweet and tender ... full of fragile memories, nicely done Bill.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

walker
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4 posted 2001-10-02 07:43 PM


This is what true love does to you, it's wonderful, it's painful, it's love. Great poem

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-02-2001).]

Dulcinea
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5 posted 2001-10-02 09:06 PM


This is so beautiful, I enjoyed the read very much, thank you. *S*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-10-02 09:12 PM


for yesterday your soft lips touched,
                all that was mine…

*sigh*....this is sooo lovely.  Enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-10-02 10:42 PM


I kissed them with my lips, which still belong to you,

This is so romantic. Lovely write


        

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2001-10-03 12:55 PM


Oh Bill, this is soooooooooooo lovely...
*~coco~*

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