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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-10-02 05:55 PM



A prisoner of love is me
there's no finer encaseration you see
One day parole, the next a new goal
A prisoner of love I be

A prisoner of passions is I
For your passion i'd truly die
The crack of your whip
the handcuffs on your hip
A prisoner of passions aye, aye.

In love I very much am
For her hand, I'd crawl across lands
To gather her gifts, and something to sniff
I'd want her to feel very grand.

If you read these words from me
dont question my insanity
For my head is on tight
and all throught the night
my bladder is weak from tea..


hehe  

Richy


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Tracey
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1 posted 2001-10-02 09:54 PM


This is so cute. I love that ending. Your bladder is weak from tea. LOL

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-10-02 11:23 PM


I have to agree with Tracey..this is pretty clever Richy! Enjoyed : )I think you should change the title though, hehe.
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