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And From These Lips
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And From These Lips |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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And From These Lips He smiled at me with heaven's eyes And kissed the rhythm of my heart. The passions rose to music's beat, Delicious thoughts, his gaze, did start. Unfolding trails of whispers deep, Surrounded by the darkness of A thousand voices guiding me Beneath the moon, it's glow above. The shouting of the silence heard Long after night had closed it's eyes, A velvet touch caressed my lips A gift to treasure came disguised. Floating down from time and space A mirrored you, not long to need. Reflecting love, a rose appeared And from behind, my eyes did feed Upon a dream, of heart in mind, A silhouette in solitaire. Shades of "lifetime" embracing me. My hand, I place into your care. A prisoner, I have become, Your kisses, I am weakened to. Surrendering, my lips are yours, Addicted I, to kiss of you. My lips are yours to do your will And from these lips desires fill. ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wonderfully written Maureen  Quite nice, spoken softly |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Rex *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done Wynter. . . tender and heartfelt. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - I love to see your writings such as this. Loving, passionate, and such moving words. From my lips, BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven, thank you for reading always and such kind remarks ((hugs)) And Bill, I always look forward to your responses, they tend to make me smile...and that's a good thing, isn't it? a tiny *smooch* from these lips ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your kisses I am weakened to." When I get a good kiss I just melt down...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful cadence and rhyme Maureen ... tender and romantic phrasing, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
The flow, rhyme and sentiment is perfect! This is wonderful!  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Nicely done enjoyed the read. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Maureen, very gentle smile, the willow is growing very nicely, keep feeding it with your style that we all look for from you..with that smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love reading these thoughts from you! Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JamesM...isn't that a wonderful feeling to melt into another's lips? *s Kit...thank you for your kind words *s Melissa...glad you could enjoy my choice of words Sy...thanks so much for your constant responses, they are appreciated *s Logan...enjoyed your response..I hope the willow holds it's own. Kay...hugs and thanks bunches *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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