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sunshinemist
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0 posted 2001-10-02 01:27 PM


You Are

You are
the reason that I can fly
soaring higher and higher towards the sky.

You are
the wind beneath my wings
as soft as the songbird who joyfully sings.

You are
my sunshine, my rays of light
my moon on a dark, dark night.

You are
my mountain, my climbing power
my petals on a beautiful flower.

You are
the one I've waited for so long
the one who sings me a tender song.

You are
the one who makes my life free
the one who really loves me.

I hope that you know how very special you are
no other could be,
my own shinning star.

~sunshinemist~


© Copyright 2001 Marie. C. - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-10-02 01:37 PM



A very perfect, shining star....this of course, I enjoyed....

sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-02 01:39 PM


Decalflame, thank you, glad that you enjoyed it!   warm smiles, ~Marie~
jwesley
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3 posted 2001-10-02 01:41 PM


Awww....so nice, my friend...

jwesley

sunshinemist
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4 posted 2001-10-02 01:44 PM


JWestley,

Thank you so much! Hugs, friend and smiles.     ~Marie~

Interloper
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5 posted 2001-10-02 02:55 PM


I am what you say
but you don't really know me
and stars do burn out
~*~
not speaking to me?
sorry for presuming such
it made me feel good
                

Larry C
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6 posted 2001-10-02 03:14 PM


Hopefully we all have our own star.  It seems you got a really good one.  Lovely,
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2001-10-02 03:40 PM


Oh you lucky lady. Maybe somewhere out there, there is a star like that waiting for me.
sunshinemist
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8 posted 2001-10-02 04:28 PM


Interloper, Thank you for reading.   Nice to meet you and I enjoyed your feel good poem!   ~Marie~  

sunshinemist
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9 posted 2001-10-02 04:33 PM


Larry C....Thank you for reading. Nice to meet you  

>Hopefully we all have our own star.<

Yes, we do!   ~Marie~

Midnitesun....Thank you for reading and I hope you do find your own shinning star.  
Warm smiles, ~Marie~


Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 2001-10-02 05:45 PM


May we all be someone's star

nice thoughts Marie

sunshinemist
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11 posted 2001-10-02 05:55 PM


Rex, Thank you for the read and your comments.  

>May we all be someone's star<

Agree!! smiles, ~Marie~

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2001-10-03 10:09 AM


Another lovely poem!
Gifted you truly are.

Hugs,
Deb

sunshinemist
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13 posted 2001-10-03 10:32 AM


Blooming Rose, Thank you so much for your lovely comments.   Warm smiles to you, ~Marie~  
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