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Open Poetry #16

can do no right.....

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-10-02 10:39 AM

Foundation of love
built so strong
why crumble at the edge
Was I not good enough
or worth my wordly pledge

Tried to do the best I could
Tried to help her achy heart
All I recieved in return
was cupids arrow replaced with dart

Now a thinking man I am
and think long into these nights
I cannot answer all these questions
to vanquish all your fright

When all I need is a little love
a thank you for what I have done
Instead my armour is holed
from the bullets, from your gun

Yes sadness is from worthlessness
and a feeling I can do no right
Yet this man stands for you
and for you he will fight

So when you trash my love
and I am finally gone
shed a tear my darling
for I compare to none...

Richy

[This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 10-02-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-10-02 11:28 AM

sounds too familiar to me...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-10-02 04:53 PM

Funny thoughts...sometimes we give up to early and some times we stick around until the bitter end...hope you can clearly see which one this is my friend...James

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-02 04:57 PM

Great poem, Richy! Love is never fair.

warm smiles, ~Marie~

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