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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-02 07:42 AM


Sarah

I tried to love you
but you didn't want
anything to do with that.
So I wanted to
be your friend
if you would just give
me half a chance.
You didn't even
blink an eye
when you left me
for another guy.
Nothing left to say
except Sarah goodbye.

JamesLee
October02
2001



© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals25
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1 posted 2001-10-02 08:12 AM


James,

    You always relay SO much emotion with your words.  *Hugs* to you.  Wonderful write.

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
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Tennessee
2 posted 2001-10-02 09:40 AM


One of the saddest truths...You just can't make someone love you.  Still trying to learn that one myself.  Lovely piece.  
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-10-02 09:56 AM


James,
Short and sweet, enjoyed

Sleepyhead
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since 2001-09-21
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4 posted 2001-10-02 10:33 AM


Very nice piece.

sleepy

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