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kaile
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0 posted 10-02-2001 03:17 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kaile

i watch a bee
gather nectar
from all kinds
of flowers,

yearning
for its
accomodating nature
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This is so cool!
I loved the "accomodating nature" phrase.
Thanks for bee-ing here.
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ah... the metaphor is nicely presented... nice job!!
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YES!!  Good one!  More more!


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Kaile~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 10-03-2001 09:11 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Not what I would have expected from your title..but it is lovely anyway and says alot.
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Faterider,
Clever, enjoyed
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Hehe, I might not know exactly what your intentions were with the metaphor of that bee, but what I pictured in my mind was funny.

What I see is a guy (bee) socialising and moving around chatting with different galz (flowers)  
 
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