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cpalmer
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0 posted 2001-10-02 12:30 PM


Passion's Plea

Just one more dance is my plea
To fulfill my every need
Passion to the highest degree
Won't you please come dance with me?


Cpalmer

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-10-02 12:33 PM


Cindi~

Well said in few words....and whew!  I love that picture!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Larry C
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2 posted 2001-10-02 12:40 PM


Wow!  That should be music to your lovers ears.  Brevity at its finest.  Well done.
Larry C

cpalmer
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3 posted 2001-10-02 12:43 PM


Melissa,
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!   I was so happy when I found the picture to add to what I was already trying to say!
hugs
Cindi

cpalmer
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4 posted 2001-10-02 12:44 PM


Larry,
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it...the feel of passion in words is so fun!
Hugs
Cindi

Kirksters
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5 posted 2001-10-03 08:08 AM


Excellent poem, you said a lot with so few words. lyl
Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2001-10-03 09:07 AM


who could turn down such an invitation? Very nicely done...


A Whisper's Caress
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7 posted 2001-10-03 10:26 AM


one more dance of passion?  lovely thought....

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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8 posted 2001-10-03 11:47 AM


Cindi~
Very nice~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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cpalmer
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9 posted 2001-10-03 01:12 PM


Kirksters,
Thank you sweets! LYL
Cindi

Cpat,
I hope no one would turn down and invitation like that! thanks
Cindi


Marge,
Thank you I'm glad you like it!
Hugs back!
Cindi

Whisper
Thank you so much!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

vlraynes
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10 posted 2001-10-03 03:24 PM



Cindi-
   Well, you already know I like this one.
   Nicely done.
   Love ya,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

cpalmer
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11 posted 2001-10-03 03:46 PM


Vicky,
Thank you, your oppinion always means so much to me!
Love ya
Cindi

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