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oh2beme
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0 posted 2001-10-01 11:39 PM


My  Friend
Take my hand and walk with me,
Till rainbow’s end my eyes doth see.
A light ahead in the tunnels end,
Stay with me my kind, dear friend.
Don’t lead me astray or cause me grief,
A lifetime with friends is all to brief.
The troubles we know, good times we share,
Always knowing the other is there.
To comfort sorrows or put a smile on one’s face.
For it’s you, my friend, I could never replace.
No matter how long or brief it has been,
It is you, my angel, that I call my friend
Please stay with me, don’t ever leave,
Mine one true friend....this I believe.


© Copyright 2001 Debbie L. Carr - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-01 11:49 PM


How nice this was! I'll be your friend : )

Your true friend I will be
Any favor you need count on me
Through good and not so good times
Through snow, rain, or sunshine
I am your friend and you are mine!


Duncan
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2 posted 2001-10-01 11:57 PM


What a great poem to write for your friend!
Larry C
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3 posted 2001-10-02 01:38 AM


Fine tribute.  Who could survive without their friend?  Very nice.
Larry C

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4 posted 2001-10-02 06:25 PM


this belongs on a greeting card. . . I love it. . .  

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-10-02 07:33 PM


I love this and had the same thought as Sven..a perfect  card for a dear friend...

*s

~Wynter

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-10-02 07:35 PM


What a wonderfully genuine tribute to a dear friend oh2beme... this is simply heartwarming, very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

oh2beme
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7 posted 2001-10-03 01:43 AM


I think I'm going to cry (Sven can I use your shoulder?) Thank you all so very much for the kind words. I never expected such response from this and I do thank you all!!!!!!

Sven....this card goes out to you for being such a dear dear man....

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