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Dream Lady #1000
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Dream Lady #1000 |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Dream lady To the woman of my dreams Without any names you know who you are You are larger than life it seems As you fill my nights with loving steam I write this from afar To the woman of my dreams Since I have been with out you my heart screams My whole world is a jar You are larger than life it seems You to me are liken to strawberries needs cream I send my wishes out among the stars To the woman of my dreams You are the winter’s snow that feeds my raging stream You are my morning star You are larger than life it seems You give my life its color scheme You are my life’s costar To the woman of my dreams You are larger than life it seems alan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Alan~ I like the rhyme and sentiment in this! Well expressed and congratulations on 1000!  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thank you Melissa....glad you liked the poem... |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
How sweet of you to write a poem about me! hehehe just kidding, It was beautiful Alan. Has your wife read this one? I liked it a lot. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Rosepetal..it might just be about you..hehehe yes my wife has read it...thanks for the smile you gave me...thanks for reading it. |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
Beautiful...and congratulations...and Alan? Dreams are sweet... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
poet unknown..thanks..just remember..dreams are not always better than life..thanks for reading |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, I guess I have to behave myself out here in Open so here goes...This is a beautiful poem, such sweet thoughts. The woman of your dreams is a very lucky lady to have such as this penned in her honour. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Makes me wish I was dreamy ALan, this is so sweet. Very tenderly done Congratulations on your 1000! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Congratulations on 1000! What a way to go! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very beautiful poem. Hope you find that dream gal! Thank you for sharing. ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Alan....oops, maybe you have found her. And congratulations on 1000! ~Marie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If we didn't have a dream lady we would have to invent one...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
alan~ this was beautiful!! great writing and your dream lady sure is lucky to have such love and devotion from you!! Take care. Amy "Don't make promises you can't keep |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thanks Amy...but I think I am the lucky one |
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