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crazymary
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since 2001-06-02
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nebraska

0 posted 2001-10-01 10:01 PM


You look so peaceful lying there
lost in dreams
without a care
I long to kiss that soft red mouth
and stroke your tousled hair
whisper to your sleeping heart
and ask if I am there
Your skin looks soft and so enticing
just waiting for my touch
I can feel the warmth I long for
my body aches for yours so much
I could wake you gently
and revel in your smile
or lay my head beside yours
and hear you dreaming
for awhile


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-01 10:08 PM


Lovely, lovely, lovely!
Enjoyed, ~Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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2 posted 2001-10-04 06:41 AM


CM~
Welcome to Passions~
This is lovely~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-10-06 07:31 AM


We love those we watch sleep. It gives me peace in my heart to admire someone not conscious of your presence. I loved this very much.

Sincerely,
Regina

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