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When Tears Need To Flow
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When Tears Need To Flow |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
When Tears Need To Flow I saw in blurry eyes The pain of yesterday A moment when time stopped The memory of times passed In the tears that flowed I saw hatred, I saw love A need to be heard Voice calling, voice unheard A little girl, sat alone Feeling betrayed Feeling hurt I heard her voice On a spring morning I asked she tell me all She spoke freely, so real When tears need to flow A listener can end the sorrow Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 10-01-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very true. At times we all need a shoulder to cry on and a friend in need...... Well done, enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
OHHH DANIEL!! I absolutely love this poem! "When tears need to flow A listener can end the sorrow" So true!! I must put this poem in my personal library : ) thanks for the great read! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
: ) ((Hugs)) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How lovely. When tears need to flow A listener can end the sorrow How true. We all need a listener when we hurt. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ This is so touching~ 'The pain of yesterday A moment when time stopped' Just sooooooo touching~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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