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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-01 06:24 PM


Roses fall from nighttime sky
of a sudden, know not why.
Angels come to sit and speak
wondering, my knees go weak.

Visions of a future bright
come to push aside the night.
Keeping hopes and dreams alive
yes, somehow, we will survive.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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england
1 posted 2001-10-01 06:43 PM


hope dies last
arthur

sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-01 07:10 PM


Very lovely!   Keep the faith, warm smiles to you   Marie
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3 posted 2001-10-01 07:30 PM


indeed we will my friend. . .indeed we will. . .

excellent work. . .

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Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-01 07:35 PM


Yes Sandra, WE WILL SURVIVE.
Lovely, ~hugs, Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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5 posted 2001-10-01 08:55 PM


Indeed, we will survive, my friend...I liked this much, Sandra.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 2001-10-01 09:16 PM


There are never too many poems of hope...I like this one very much  
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2001-10-01 10:34 PM


CatalinaMoon~

'Visions of a future bright
come to push aside the night.'


I pray it is so~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tracey
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8 posted 2001-10-01 10:39 PM


What beautiful thoughts and dreams here. Lovely imagery too. May all your dreams come true my friend

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2001-10-02 12:02 PM


Hope springs eternal and isn't that wonderful?  Well, your writing is
Decaflame
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10 posted 2001-10-02 12:03 PM



Very good....you've come a long way, Cat...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2001-10-02 12:10 PM


nice to see your  hopefilled words. *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



The Lady of Shallot
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12 posted 2001-10-03 08:18 PM


yes, this lifted me a lot, thank you for this one!
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
13 posted 2001-10-03 08:46 PM


I really like this.
Logan
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14 posted 2001-10-03 09:57 PM


Yes, Sandra, you will survive for you have the strength to do so..very gentle smile..enjoyed
boardman
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15 posted 2001-10-03 11:27 PM


Hi Sandra,

I like this one very much!
Very nicely put.

Beautiful picture too!

Keep up the good work.
I Will look for some more.

Vince

Ours minds are endless atoms in search of the beginning - boardman

Victoria
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16 posted 2001-10-04 03:10 PM


Good luck hon...hugss...hope all is well

                    ~Victoria~

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17 posted 2001-10-04 03:14 PM




Touching and beautiful...

MARK V SHELDON
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18 posted 2001-10-04 04:15 PM


Ahh, visions...  one step away from action;  two steps from attainment;  three steps from memories;  and four steps from regret...  I hope you "two-step it" to see your dreams come true!  

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

rwood
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19 posted 2001-10-04 06:27 PM


yes, somehow, we will survive.


A vision and voice of determination. We must!
Very wonderfully done Sandra!

Sincerely,
Regina

ParisGrl
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20 posted 2001-10-04 06:35 PM


Cat,

I loved this........it gives me hope.

~Laura~

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2001-10-04 06:43 PM


I intend to keep on living until I die...and then I will live my new life...James
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