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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-10-01 05:31 PM



upon the wind their song was sung
words once spoken by native tongue
their quest still sought beyond the grave
plains still trod by hearts yet brave


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sunshinemist
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1 posted 2001-10-01 05:35 PM


A short one! Makes a big statement.  
Warm smiles, Marie  

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2 posted 2001-10-01 05:38 PM


As ever was, Lady, as ever was, nice perspective here...very gentle smile
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-01 05:48 PM


I don't have the passion you and Marge have for the early pioneers and/or Native Americans, but I do have a passion for good poetry and this qualifies, indeed!
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4 posted 2001-10-01 06:27 PM


Good thoughts, enjoyed.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-10-01 06:39 PM


enjoy
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-10-04 06:31 AM


LadyInWhite~

'upon the wind their song was sung
words once spoken by native tongue
their quest still sought beyond the grave
plains still trod by hearts yet brave'


In it's entirety~ a spiritual beauty~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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The Lady of Shallot
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7 posted 2001-10-04 09:00 AM


I enjoyed this for it's simplicity and emotion!
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8 posted 2001-10-04 09:07 AM


Well done my Lady. *L*
Nan
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9 posted 2001-10-04 09:27 AM


Yes indeedy.. Brave hearts still walk among us... Nicely done, Lady..
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10 posted 2001-10-04 09:31 AM


Very good. I like this.
Alan
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11 posted 2001-10-04 10:16 AM


beautiful.
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