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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-10-01 03:47 PM




yes I am learning
how to survive in water
wild cats can swim too
haven't you seen this before
well me neither, that's for sure.


01/10/01

Charisma
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1 posted 2001-10-01 03:58 PM


this is what I call
a wild well written tanka
with cat-chy phrases
but I have seen this before
and was amazed at it then

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-10-01 05:42 PM


Beautiful tanka and beautiful pic

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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3 posted 2001-10-01 07:48 PM


excellent. . . you do these very well. . .



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4 posted 2001-10-01 07:59 PM


This is very good.  Wish I could do them.
Enjoyed... ~Nancy~


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So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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5 posted 2001-10-01 10:31 PM


Charisma~
Beautifully done ...
AND .. I have never forgotten the day
that I did indeed see them (a dozen of them)
... it was beauty in liquid motion~

Lovely presentation, as always~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-10-04 06:36 AM


A BUMP for the sheer beauty of sharing~

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