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CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2001-10-01 03:23 PM

*~Only a dream away~*

In stillness
of the piercing dark
alone in thoughts
of you I am
in wonderment
I gaze beyond
the cracklings
of a calming fire
and listen to
the echo sounds
that roam around
in a cloak of fog
it comes to me
in times like this
when my soul
is weakened
and my heart
cannot speak
struggling to find
a reason
to laugh or simply
just to smile
and make logic
of this destiny
while quivering
on bended knee
as emptiness
bounces around
inside the conscious
of my mind
there are no words
that I can find
nor answers to
a reason why
just emptiness
imprisoned inside
my bleeding heart
each passing night
perhaps the answers
can be found
amid the stars
of sapphire skies
as I carefully
erase all trace
abandoning tears
I've cried today
and drift off into
dreams afar
wishing upon
the brightest star
that seems to be
within my reach
appearing there
in front of me
That you and I
will find a way
to be together
forever and a day....
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-01-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-10-01 03:31 PM

Perhaps the answers
can be found
amid the stars
of sapphire skies
as I carefully
erase all trace
of abandoned tears
I've cried today
and drift off into
dreams afar
wishing upon
the brightest star
===================================

absolutely lovely....
what a beautiful poem of longing and promise.
And how groovy to see your name here again sweet poetess

Beautiful writing Coco.
jm

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-10-01 03:33 PM

And you know you will, too. Sad but lovely girl friend.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-01 03:40 PM

Its interesting how life sometimes brings two closer and closer together...James

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2001-10-01 03:59 PM

JANET, thank you so very much for your friendly embrace today has brought warmth to my heart...INTERLOPER, your words do comfort from afar thank you sweetie a whole bunch...JAMES, thank you for your reply2me echoes what my heart does indeed believe...

Hugs2u3PoetFriends
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-01-2001).]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-10-01 04:07 PM

ooooohhhhhh how beautiful written Coco......and soooooooo good to see you here my friend. hope to see many more gems from your hand.

(((warm hugs)))

Charisma

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-01 04:17 PM

ahhhh. . . indeed a wonderful array of gems from one of the brightest. . .

good to see you again PoetFriend Coco. . . please stay awhile. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-01 04:29 PM

A heart that shares is a huge heart indeed. Your poem speaks of all the emotions Coco, and so well. As I am feeling a lot of these right now, I understood and "felt" your poem to the core of me. Extremely well done. I do see so gentle stillness in your words though.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2001-10-01 04:35 PM

CHARISMA, so nice2see you once again and ya know I've always got my arms extended to give you teddybearhugs PoetFriend...
SVEN, you have a way with words on page that seems to reach out to me and I smile riteBackAtYa sweetPoetFriend always...
*~coco~*

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2001-10-01 04:43 PM

MYSTERIA, I am having problems with my computer today and it appears I missed a reply back2u previously so here I am in this separate box to let you know just how much I appreciate your reply2me2day...
Hugs2uSweetie
*~coco~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-10-01 05:02 PM

COCO!!!!!

does me good to read your beautiful words again. Have missed you poetess

warm hugs to you

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-10-01 06:50 PM

good to see you again my friend

nice

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

12 posted 2001-10-01 07:14 PM

Coco, Splendid writing. Much enjoyed!

Very nice to meet you.

and smiles, Marie

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2001-10-01 07:20 PM

Coco,
Nice to read you words again, enjoyed

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2001-10-01 09:32 PM

LaCocoBaci~
So good to see your sweet self here~

'amid the stars
of sapphire skies
as I carefully
erase all trace
abandoning tears
I've cried today'

This is delicately felt~
*Hugs* to you, sweet poetess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

15 posted 2001-10-02 08:20 AM

Always a delight to find one of your gems here!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

16 posted 2001-10-03 01:37 AM

SEA... you're a sweetheart my friend and I thankU ->Muaah on cheekz2U-<

Vandana... nice2cU dropped SweetPoetFriend and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem hugs2U

SunshineMist... bonjour and thank you4letting me know you enjoyed the poem I'm pleased2meetU2 sweetie

Seymour... ya know how much I appreciate your stopping thru here and letting me know well I'll tell ya PoetFriend I do very very much and hugs2Ualways

Marge, dearPoetFriend, my heart sends out hugs2U & muaah on cheeks 2u2Gurl

Eagle1, thank your for your sweet comments, it's always a treat to have you read a poem I write here and ya know you always seem2bring out many a smiles from all the way over there

PoetFriend

*~coco~*

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2001-10-08 12:04 PM

Coco-
   This is so gently penned..just lovely.
   Good to see you back, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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