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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-01 02:57 PM


take your time with me
take anything you wish dear
I am yours to take
~*~
you can take my heart
it is already yours dear
happily given
~*~
you can take my love
you have possessed it always
cherished gift of mine
~*~
you can take my lips
my kisses are just for you
such sweet unison
~*~
you can take my arms
they long only to hold you
tenderly, closely
~*~
you can take my mind
it holds only thoughts of you
blissful reverie
~*~
I am yours to take
totally and utterly
I give you myself

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-10-01 03:16 PM



All these promises...goodness!

SmittenKitten
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2 posted 2001-10-01 03:27 PM



Interloper~ Strung together into a beautiful necklace for all to peer at and enjoy    lovely sequence!

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-10-01 04:24 PM


such sweetness from you
words of love so beautiful
sweep me off my feet

~*~
make my heart flutter
with your sweet and gentle way
and caressing words

~*~

your words pull me in
wrapping me up in your verse
dear poet of love

~*~

dear one you move me
with your loving poetry
making my soul smile


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-01 04:51 PM


Oh I love this!!  What's going to happen next??
Lovely, lovely lovely, oh sweet love!!

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5 posted 2001-10-01 04:53 PM


and it seems you offer it all... nicely done pard... should set some hearts aflutter somewhere...



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