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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-10-01 02:55 PM


Faced with fears of fading faces
The best and worst of times still clash
My heart holds on
My mind erases
Each wave I ride will only crash
Faced with fears of unknown places
The highs and lows bring me to tears
My broken hand
Is out of aces
I’m folding after 19 years


© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-10-01 06:43 PM


Very sad, but nicely done Kevin. Those aces will come to your healed hand soon.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Tennessee Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-01 07:17 PM


Wow.  I'm not sure how to respond to this.  It's wonderful, but sure pulls at the heart strings.  Lovely write.    

[This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (edited 10-01-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-10-01 08:36 PM


I would rather see you unfolding.
Please keep writing
you have a nice flowing style.

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4 posted 2001-10-01 08:40 PM


Sad poem Kevin, but very well written.   Nice to meet you also. Smiles, Marie  
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5 posted 2001-10-01 10:07 PM


Kevin~
Hello, sweet poet~

Time to shuffle the deck and deal again~
Keep the aces up your sleeve~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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