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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-10-01 12:38 PM



breathless...
on the perpetual verge
of laughter

heart smiles
seeping from the essense
of me

anxiety tickling
my soul

i've been awakened
by such sunshine;
the smile in your voice
unmistakable...

the catch in my breath
reflecting my want
for more of you

i can barely wait
for you to reach me
again...

dgvarner
10-01-01



~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..."  mwsmith

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-01-2001).]

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-10-01 12:43 PM



I love this!  I love it when people smile with their eyes as well, and I love the thought of "a smile in a man's voice"  

Well expressed!  You've inspired me!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

rascalx
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2 posted 2001-10-01 01:03 PM


Gale,
     I'm smiling even wider now. Thank you!    
                          - Jeff

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-10-01 01:14 PM


DG~
What a wonderful grinner~
Upbeat and enthusiastic~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-01 01:17 PM


Love smiles...just love em!  
Especially in a man's voice. Mmmmm.


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-10-01 01:19 PM



Don't forget to leave your number! This likes me, with smiles!

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-10-01 01:46 PM


Reminds me of that song 'Anticipation'.  Reads like a smile!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-10-01 03:27 PM


Quite an effect...this smile...James
SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2001-10-01 03:30 PM



dgvarner~ aww, heart smiles are the best kind    lovely poem!

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2001-10-01 04:08 PM


Sweetly sensual.  This likes me a great deal!  Well done!
dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-10-01 11:05 PM


MELISSA..glad you enjoyed..he has a great smile in his voice..  
RASCAL..keep smiling   i'm enjoying it thoroughly...  
MARGIE..thank you!  
ENCHANTRESS..yes me too   thanks for reading!
SUNSHINE..LOL..with a name like sunshine, this one could be about you huh...   teehee..thanks for reading..
DUNCAN..you'll have to sing me that one..dont think i know it...!  glad you enjoyed..  
JAMES..happy to know it has the effect     thank you  
KRISTA..they are pretty cool huh..   thanks!
INTERLOPER..thank you for such a nice reply!  glad this one liked you  

hugs, g




~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"as i lay me down to sleep
this i pray...that you will hold me dear,
though i'm far a way..." sbhawkins

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-01-2001).]

vlraynes
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11 posted 2001-10-01 11:06 PM



dg-
  I'm liking this one lots!
  Makes me smile to see you smiling.
  Love ya,
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

kaile
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12 posted 2001-10-02 02:32 AM


cool..glad to be stroked by your sensual pieces again..
Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2001-10-02 03:03 AM


all  

regards,
sudhir

Larry C
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14 posted 2001-10-02 03:04 AM


Love and joy expressed in ways that invite real appeal.  Enchanting poem for true romantic.  Just the right amount of tease.  Well done.  Thanks,
Larry C

EagleOne
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15 posted 2001-10-02 08:17 AM


I think I'll just have to ditto Vicky here! Take care!  

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 10-02-2001).]

dgvarner
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16 posted 2001-10-04 12:06 PM


TRICKS..good to BE smiling...      
KAILE..lol @ you..  glad you enjoyed my..uh..sensual stroking...lol  
SUDHIR..thanks for reading    
LARRY..enjoyed your reply..     thanks for stopping in!
EAGLE..thanks, my flyer friend..    


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i laugh,i love,i hope,i try..i hurt,i need,i fear,i cry..and i know you do the same things too..so we're really not that different,me & you" c.raye


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-04-2001).]

Krawdad
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17 posted 2001-10-04 12:31 PM


The power of the smile . . . continues to amaze me!
I like this, dg.
thanks
And a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you.
                 

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