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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-10-01 11:10 AM


Iambe stretched out
Lying under the front end
Of Jim’s old International
Trying to loosen the bolts
Holding the steering gear to the frame.

It had been months since I had seen her
Thousands of miles and hundreds of days
Since I had loaded the old truck and left


She stopped and crawled out
As the old pickup coughed on last gasp
And crunched gravel under tires in a stop

Her eyes had no Idea what I saw
And what I had seen
Still, they peered at me
Looking for a reason for my return

I just nodded
Walked over to the shade
And found a place to sit
My back to rough bark
And she
Smiled


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-10-01 11:37 AM



Iambe's appearance to the Forums is the beginning of a new saga....

next chapter, please....

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-10-01 11:40 AM


it's refreshing to read a poem I can understand!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-10-01 11:43 AM


More, please?  
This is very interesting...can't wait for the next post.
~Hugs for this one, Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-10-01 01:25 PM


Looks like I'm going to be visiting the archives...already hooked.
SmittenKitten
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5 posted 2001-10-01 02:44 PM



Cpat Hair~ Hmm...it seems I've been missing out on something!  I too shall have to search through the archives to uncover the mystery.

This was a lovely and intriguing write  

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Interloper
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6 posted 2001-10-01 03:41 PM


I read 'em backward, Ron, but enjoyed 'em all just the same
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-10-01 06:55 PM


to "Interloper"---you read 'em backwards? she LIKES THAT!  

and Ron, you've made my day...Iambe lives in YOU, yanno...  

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2001-10-02 03:22 AM


Ah! This is so well-written ... I am in my search on the Iambe series...

Regards, Ron,
Sudhir

rwood
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9 posted 2001-10-03 08:52 PM


A warm welcome from a very intriguing character. I love it already! I look forward to more as you made me there under the shade tree looking on.  

Sincerely,
Regina

Corinne
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10 posted 2001-10-03 09:39 PM


Okay, now I must find the rest of these lambe stories I've been hearing about!

Very sweet in character!

cor

Nan
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11 posted 2001-10-05 07:33 AM


Wait for me Corinne - I'm with ya..
Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2001-10-05 07:52 AM


Jumping on the bandwagon here Ron ... very nicely done. You've enticed me to discover more of this story!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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13 posted 2002-09-26 02:01 PM


I like what you didn't say, here.

Thereby, saying it all.

Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2005-05-10 02:42 PM


I miss Iambe.

I miss the stories.  

'bout time some of the newbies read Iambe's story.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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