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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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So many mistakes she has made Too many times she has paid She lives with so much solitude And with her he is always rude She moved so far away from home Now the streets she does roam She has no friends or family Her life is full of negativity Life is filled with loneliness And so much more craziness Sometimes she wishes she'd die Then maybe he would cry But, it would be too late Cause then she'd escape © By Sue 9/2/01 |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Sue, A very sad poem, Thank you for sharing, and I am very glad to meet you.  Marie |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds to me like he is the one making the mistakes. Take care of you, hugs, SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Smartchick, This doesn't sound so smart. Sad subject good write. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
welcome my dear i know only to well that you cant write this sort of thing unless you have felt it they are not acedemic exercises arthur |
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