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The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2001-10-01 12:51 PM

--- A Little More ---

My heart is broken, my spirit cries.
I only lived to see your eyes.

But now you've left, you've gone away.
I died a little more today.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-10-01 01:50 AM

LonelyStranger~ Succinctly expressed...losing someone you love is never easy...you've expressed the feeling perfectly.

Hugs,
~Krista

Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

2 posted 2001-10-01 02:25 AM

I feel the pain in this one. Well written.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2001-10-01 05:26 AM

Now that was good!
Arthur

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-10-01 08:01 AM

LonelyStranger~
If a *hug* would help ...
I send a big one~
Hug~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-10-01 09:03 AM

This is sad. But, very well expressed.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-10-01 10:12 AM

(((warm hugs)))

Charisma

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-10-01 10:23 AM

Poignant!!! Well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-10-01 10:41 AM

sad

but nice

bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

9 posted 2001-10-01 10:59 AM

i too just lost someone close to me. this made me cry.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-10-01 03:38 PM

Ah yes one of the sad misfortunes of love to lose someone we love...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-10-01 04:44 PM

Ah Lonely Stranger...This is too sad....well said, but said. (((HUGS))) Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

12 posted 2001-10-01 09:22 PM

You tell a whole story here in so few lines. So touching

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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