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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2001-09-30 10:35 PM



The soft sounds of summer leaves
That dance in the forest cathedral
Songs of birds never heard
Resound in the forest primeval

A place within this world untouched
Never seen by human eyes
A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs

Worldly is my everyday name
But my heart holds a passion true
Every day, every moment I live,
I live to love just you.

© Copyright 2001 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-09-30 10:39 PM


ahhh, geez, I am so glad you reposted, so it is there again for ones like me who never recieved those soft words the first time..thank you...very gentle smile
Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-30 10:41 PM


I'm, glad yu reposted this too.  It is very enchanting.  Enjoyed so much!


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-09-30 10:43 PM


"A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs"

Your words flow as softly as a whisper Sharon ... just beautiful, very much enjoyed your sentiments in this lovely piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-09-30 10:58 PM


Ah, this lines just melted my heart, as I guess I need to hear these words...Where Angels wings are sighs.   This was simply beautiful.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

The Lady of Shallot
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5 posted 2001-10-10 09:30 AM


Took me to a forest, or perhaps a glen, wonderful feeling.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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6 posted 2001-10-10 10:14 AM


This is very good. I'm glad you reposted it. Cause, I didn't get to read it.
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7 posted 2001-10-10 10:33 AM


So soft and Beautiful PVD.  Thank you for reposting.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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8 posted 2001-10-10 10:59 AM


enjoy
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9 posted 2001-10-10 08:09 PM


Very soft.....and lovely, Sharon! Beautiful!
Nan
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10 posted 2001-10-10 09:14 PM


"Where angels wings are sighs"
My favorite line - Lovely, PdV..

Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 2001-10-10 09:33 PM


Beautiful writing
Especially like the second verse

very nice

Tracey
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12 posted 2001-10-11 07:13 AM


So glad you reposted it since I didn't get to see it the first time. Beautiful thoughts and beautiful piece of writing.

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LngJhnAg
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13 posted 2001-10-11 07:16 AM


Ms DeVine - This is very nice.  I didn't read it the first time through.  We miss so much when we don't use the Search feature once in awhile.
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