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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-09-30 08:03 PM

Upon the stage of autumn
swirling leaves dance their ballet
tip toeing toward winter
the tutu in the breeze leads the way

Crackling music sings like grande violins
leaving burnt memories astray
Embers whisper softly to the sparrows
red breasted robins and blue jays
flying south across the heavens
in an allegro sort of way

Rustic fragrance intoxicates the wind
within the majestic skies
as jack o lanterns light the stage
ballerinas in the wind dance by

Autumn is dancing her petit pirouettes
a royale of amber golds and burnt reds
naked limbs dance their arabesque
upon the gingery stage of autumn

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-01-2001).]

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-09-30 08:05 PM

Good one! I just love autumn too.

Nice to meet you also. Warm autumn smiles, ~Marie~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-30 08:10 PM

Victoria, this is a wonderful read about a beautiful time of year. Loved it
alan

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-09-30 08:53 PM

My favorite time as well, though it only lasts a short time before the dreaded WINTER attacks..
Beautifully done, Vic.
Sandra

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-10-01 12:18 PM

thank you Sunshine, Alan and Sandra...i appreciate your sweet comments...hugsss

~Victoria~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-10-01 09:08 AM

Victoria~
Resplendent imagery, poetess~
Thanks for sharing~
Good to see you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-10-01 09:18 AM

Victoria,
I love the petit peroettes.
Beautiful entrance into my favorite season.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-10-01 09:27 AM

Victoria, this is so beautiful the images and smells ahhhhhha, I love Fall

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-10-01 10:51 AM

Victoria, you've given my favorite season new color

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-10-01 12:17 PM

Marge..thank you so much Marge..autumn
always inspires me to write..hugss

Annie..thank you..it is my favorite too.
makes you happy to be alive.. hugs

Sea..thank you..yes i love the smell
of burning leaves..glad you enjoyed hugss

Kathleen...thank you so much..nice to hear from you
today...so all is well hugss

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-02 06:29 PM

encore!! encore!!!

wonderfully done my friend. . . I can't wait for the next performance. . .

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-10-02 07:24 PM

so nice..the leaves aren't falling here yet, just turning their beautiful rich shades now...come on out and see them *s
~Wynter

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2001-10-02 10:11 PM

thank you sven and wynter...thank you for peeking in ...
glad you both enjoyed...hugss

~Victoria~

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