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say "i love you" |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
IF I SHOULD DIE TOMORROW WOULD YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CARED WOULD YOU KNOW THE LOVE I HAD FOR YOU WAS EVER CONSTANT, ALWAYS THERE IF TODAY WAS MY LAST DAY WITH YOU WOULD YOU BE RIGHT HERE WITH ME WOULD YOU HOLD ME WITHOUT LETTING GO BE THE LAST FACE THAT I SEE SEE, TODAY IS ALL WE HAVE TO GIVE TOMORROW'S JUST A DREAM THE PAST IS LIKE A REAR VIEW MIRROR IT'S ALL BEHIND YOU, CAN'T YOU SEE SO HOLD ON TO THIS MOMENT CUZ' TOMORROW, IT MAY BE GONE TELL THE ONES YOU LOVE, YOU LOVE THEM TELL THEM NOW, DON'T WAIT TOO LONG AND FOR WHAT IT'S WORTH, I LOVE YOU PLEASE BELIEVE IT, KNOW IT'S TRUE AND IF THIS SHOULD BE MY LAST DAY HERE I'M SO GLAD IT WAS WITH YOU IF I SHOULD DIE TOMORROW YOU WOULD KNOW HOW MUCH I CARED YOU WOULD KNOW THE LOVE I HAD FOR YOU WAS EVER CONSTANT, ALWAYS THERE.... [This message has been edited by bonnie1961 (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lovely thoughts to ponder ... Nicely written too Enjoyed  Welcome to Passions [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Bonnie! What a lovely and thoughtful first post ... we should all heed this advice. I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My respect goes to you for this one. Welcome and stay a while. -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a lovely sincere cadence kissed poem Bonnie... full of truths and wisdom ...with a perfect ending the repetative verse gave it the harmonies of a song... Welcome to Poetry Land ... its so nice to meet you. take care jm We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions nice |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Bonnie, Very lovely poem, and welcome to Passions. :-) I am a newbie too. Warm smiles and hugs, ~Marie~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem Bonnie! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Bonnie, welcome to Passions. What an inspiring poem, we should all remember this. I look forward to reading more of your work. Please check your email for a message. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions, Bonnie. You've made quite an entrance with this gem. Nicely written. All writing comes |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Bonnie, Welcome you have a home here. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a great entrance, with a nicely flowing love song. You are right, it is very important to tell someone you love them ...and not hold onto those words a minute too long! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely poem, lovely thoughts. Welcome. I look forward to more If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"SO HOLD ON TO THIS MOMENT CUZ' TOMORROW, IT MAY BE GONE TELL THE ONES YOU LOVE, YOU LOVE THEM TELL THEM NOW, DON'T WAIT TOO LONG" Words to live by, welcome! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Bonnie~ Lovely first post! Words to live by. Welcome to Passions! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Welcome to the wonderful circle of Passions poets and friends~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good. And so true. You should tell the ones you love, that you love them, everyday. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...this love...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
welocme to Passions. I look forward to further work from you. May I suggest you not type in all caps. That is the internet equivalent of shouting, yet what your wrote should be shouted from the rooftops |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
tight poem.....liked it alot joe |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
thsnk you, everyone. and you're right, interloper, didnt men to yell!! lol |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
thank you, everyone. and you're right, interloper, didnt men to yell!! lol |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was wonderful. It reads like a song. Welcome to passions, and I enjoyed this very much.  Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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