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walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-30 10:02 AM



You conquer
you kiss
searching me
tempting me
teasing me
Taking me
to the point
where unknowingly
I want more
You torture me
feeling me
showing me
how much you want me
You know your power
You slip into me
slowly
under my skin

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
sunshinemist
Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
1 posted 2001-09-30 10:19 AM


Walker, very nice and sensual. Much enjoyed.   ~Marie
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-09-30 03:18 PM


I believe I remember this feeling - some!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-09-30 03:37 PM


Yes...James
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-09-30 03:40 PM



Oooh, I like this!    So sensual and very true of deep love and attraction~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Ariana
Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
5 posted 2001-09-30 03:42 PM


Fantastic is the only word I could come up with.  Enjoy your work.
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