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Springtime storm
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Springtime storm |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I love the feel of springtime storm Before the rain; when wind is warm When clouds they gather up to meet A time of rare; you just can’t beat When raindrops then, they slowly fall As dry earth beckons with its call The scent of pleasure from the earth What are times like this just worth? I watch becalmed as tree limbs prance As nature and her wind do dance Then share a drop of nature’s wine Amongst it all, on stage divine |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ This piece clearly dances with lively imagery~ 'I watch becalmed as tree limbs prance As nature and her wind do dance Then share a drop of nature’s wine Amongst it all, on stage divine' Oh ... I like this so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the smell of warm, refreshed by tears... this is wonderful, Rick! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Beautiful words and expressions. I loved it.  Storms are great. Nice to meet you, Rick. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know this exact moment, the smells in the air, the feel of awaiting the first drops. What a good job you did on it. Sandra |
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