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arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2001-09-30 06:34 AM

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You are gone from me
To lie in sands by a frozen sea
In a far and distant land

I must stay and grieve alone
Sharing silence with your stone
Dying flowers in a shaking hand

I must leave you and journey on
My life continues though yours is gone
We are parted , forgive and understand

And all will end as it must
Our hearts and bodies turned to dust
With you in that so distant land

It is nice here
The frozen sea sparkles like fire
And the clouds are white
There is silence
There is only you
And a rock
And you
The soul of my dreams

arthur

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-30 07:58 AM

Arthur~
This is tenderly sorrowful ... yet, beautifully written~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2001-09-30 08:05 AM

Artur, this is a great write indeed, one with a change of writing style to what I normally see. There is much sorrow, yet peace becalms our end.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-30 08:40 AM

Michael...This is fantastic! So sad, but lovingly done. Hugs across the pond.
~Nancy~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-09-30 09:01 AM

This has touched me in so many ways.....

Sad.......and expressed so wonderfully.

Thank you
*************************

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-09-30 09:39 AM

Hi, I believe this is the first poem of yours I have read, it is very heart touching, and done so well. Sad but clear images. Take care.
Sandra

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-09-30 10:43 AM

arthur--I have learned that love always stays alive in the heart. A touching poem here.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

7 posted 2001-09-30 10:49 AM

Arthur, a very sad and touching poem. Very well expressed.

Thank you and very nice to meet you. ~Marie~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-09-30 10:50 AM

nice

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-09-30 09:15 PM

Ah, this is a heartfelt, moving piece. You express your emotion so well here. Well done Arthur

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

10 posted 2001-09-30 09:41 PM

~Oh wow. What words! Enjoyed much. *Peace.

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