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In Rake Of Autumnal Angels

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


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In Rake Of Autumnal Angels

~*Marge Tindal*~

Sorrow drips around us
in shedding visions of recall
Someday - somehow
we will wish it from our fall

Perhaps a future light
of hope will shine
But for now our hearts lay
in sorrowing repine
So sadly in remember
the autumnal loss
of this September

No leaf has fallen unclaimed
in the heart of brotherly remembrance~


Beyond the glow of autumnal sun
we'll meet to rake angels,
every one~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-30-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 09-30-2001 10:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Sometimes you leave me without words, this being one of those times....
sunshinemist
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2 posted 09-30-2001 10:41 AM       View Profile for sunshinemist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sunshinemist

Marge, How well we all shall remember this fall. Thank you so much for sharing.   ~Marie  Nice to meet you!  
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-30-2001 10:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
You have a beautiful soul. *L*
Denise
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4 posted 09-30-2001 11:47 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Now is the time for grief. Yet even with the healing we will always have the remember of our saddest September.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 10-01-2001 08:28 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Karilea~
I understand ... when I think the words are gone, they return in such deep mourning~
I'm just not ready or able to move beyond ... not yet~

SunshineMist~
Thank you for remembering~

Seymour~
Takes one to know one, my friend~

Denise~
I'm waiting and wanting the healing to begin~

**Arthur asked me to post this~

quote:
Dear marge
i have tried to post a reply to your latest poem but i cant
the system will not let me

So
here is what i wanted to say

So many so many
each a precious memory
happy memeory of what was
sad at what is no longer

As i sit here the leaves blow by my window
And i remember

thanks for sharing your gift
Arthur
And I thank you for the heartfelt beauty of your thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


6 posted 10-04-2001 01:48 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Marge-
   There are no words to explain how deeply
   this touches...all I can say is...I know...

             "Sorrow drips around us
           in shedding visions of recall
               Someday - somehow
           we will wish it from our fall"

           "No leaf has fallen unclaimed
     in the heart of brotherly remembrance~"


   So true, my friend.  We will remember
   each and every angel, and we will not cease
   to pray as the recovery efforts continue.
   LOVE YOU~
   Hugs,  
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 10-04-2001 01:51 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I'm so glad vicky found this one for me!!!

This is beautiful and a touching analogy...

This is now among my favorites from you...

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This is so very touching to the heart!!

Standing ovation...
Victoria
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9 posted 10-04-2001 02:36 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

beautifully written Marge...yes we will remember the angels of this autumn forever..hugsss

              ~Victoria~
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Marge~  We will always remember this fall....beautiful expression of your compassionate heart sweet friend.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

EagleOne
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11 posted 10-05-2001 06:21 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

In time my friend, in time! Wonderfully done.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Marge Tindal
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Vicky~
I understand ...
It will be a long time coming, but we will hold the memories forever~

Serenity~
Thank you for the reply~

TwilightMyst~
Thank you so much~

Victoria~
Remembering is about all we can do now~
But ... we must do it~

SmittenKitten~
Our hearts are full of confusion and compassion, dear one~
Thank you~

EagleOne~
I hope so dear friend~
God, I hope so~
Thank you for your hugs of understanding~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

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13 posted 10-05-2001 01:38 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

marge - You have the soul of an angel, did you know that?  I always get something out of your poems.
Martie
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14 posted 10-05-2001 02:42 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge

"Beyond the glow of autumnal sun
we'll meet to rake angels,
every one"

Yes, we will!  
Charisma
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15 posted 10-05-2001 03:16 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

your words translate feelings from within...and you know how to touch hearts deeply with your words....thank you for sharing beautiful lady!

((hugs))
Charisma
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16 posted 10-05-2001 03:24 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

No leaf has fallen unclaimed
in the heart of brotherly remembrance~

Thank you for touching my heart today,
dear lady.  ~Hugs, Nancy~
Kit McCallum
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17 posted 10-05-2001 07:07 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Marge ... have I told you how much I appreciate you my friend?  You do have a beautiful soul my dear. Many hugs for this tender piece.  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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18 posted 10-05-2001 09:33 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

This is an awesome painting of our reality. Thanks.
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 09-10-2002 09:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

It's all as raw as if it happened yesterday ...
and it feels as if it will never heal~

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