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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2001-09-30 12:42 PM


Sad for what is lost

Glad for what is found

Brutal love

Prometheus bound



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1 posted 2001-09-30 01:44 AM


I too am glad for what is found, it's beautiful. Nicely done.

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2 posted 2001-09-30 01:58 AM


Mysteria, thank you. This is one of my shortest, an attempt at a haiku/senryu...I just call them my 'shorties'.
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3 posted 2001-09-30 01:44 PM


well done. . .

I like it. . . there's so much here. . .

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Yes, I enjoyed as well. Nice and strong.
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Wonderful write!

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6 posted 2001-09-30 01:58 PM


Sven, thank you.  Sometimes less is more.

catalinamoon..Thanks. Yes, the small can be mighty and strong.

Nate Dogg, thank you for reading and commenting. (And please keep reading, and posting your own thoughts more often)

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