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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-29 09:56 PM

I keep thinking of your eyes
the way they sparkle
when you laugh
cloud over
when you brood
the way they darken
when you’re in that mood
I keep thinking of your mouth
twitching with tease
smiling so sexy
with a gentle ease
strong melting kisses
that weaken my knees
I keep thinking of your arms
the scent of your skin
holding me safe
getting lost within…..
strength of a hero
gentleness of a friend
hugs with no limits
support to lend
I keep thinking of your heart
quietly revealed
one piece at a time
found showing abstrusely
in your words of rhyme
fragile with pride
full of such love
you try to hide
I keep thinking of you
and all that you are
but I realize I haven’t
gotten that far
so much more
needed to know
wanting to see
all that you are willing
to share with me
~SEA~

"when I catch my breath, it's you I breathe" ~Michelle Branch~

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2001-09-29 10:15 PM

SEA,

Sheesh chickie how I LOVE your poetry! Excellent work as always

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-29 10:16 PM

Susan...This is so lovely and sensual.
"I keep thinking of your arms
the scent of your skin
holding me safe
getting lost within….."
I know someone I feel this way about....
thank you. ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-09-29 10:19 PM

Ahh, SEA, it gets much more, someone is gonna be lost...sigh, you have such a way with your words..excellent as usual..very gentle smile

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-09-29 11:11 PM

Nice and sweet, just like you, my friend. It's a pretty one. He sounds like a great guy .

((((hugs))))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-30 12:19 PM

This is lovely.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2001-09-30 12:25 PM

SEA~ How sweet is this?

Makes me awww and get all smiley

Lovely write!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

7 posted 2001-09-30 12:30 PM

This is so beautiful.
I'd quote what I like about it, but
no sense pasting the whole thing
back into this thread.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-09-30 08:26 AM

Wow.....this is so wonderful.....and so full of love. I wish you'd find all the answers and he'd hand them all over to you.....

Thank you.....

******************************

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

9 posted 2001-09-30 09:12 AM

"...fragile with pride,
full of such love
you try to hide."

Very nice, Susan. You do write so wonderfully.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

10 posted 2001-09-30 09:23 AM

Sea, Very beautiful and sensual poem. Your choice of words, excellent.

Nice to meet you too!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2001-09-30 09:33 AM

Hi, this is beautiful, he must be a happy man, to have so much love from you. So nice to know some women do find a wonderful man, that continues to intrigue.
Sandra

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

12 posted 2001-09-30 09:49 AM

wonderfully fulfilling, these words of endearments
that puzzle the heart
and bewilder our destinies

your gift with words is precious....tSR

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

13 posted 2001-09-30 09:51 AM

The "mystery" of him is what attracts me to him. I love this one, I relate.

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

14 posted 2001-09-30 10:29 AM

I thought there for a minute I was in the adult forum. This piece is so sensual with longing. Beautiful my friend.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

15 posted 2001-09-30 03:19 PM

feeling a bit romantic are we???

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

16 posted 2001-10-01 01:27 AM

Too good to be true...one of you has to be a fantasy. Made me feel good to read this, SEA. Thanks.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2001-10-01 11:50 AM

there is no puzzle
for you are the key to me
That unlocks my love

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

18 posted 2001-10-01 12:53 PM

thank you all so much for enjoying this poem......

and Interloper,

figuring you out
piece by piece is my heart's quest
I've only began

~*~

solving this puzzle
will take a lifetime of love
to understand "you"

~*~

knowing a bit more
as each piece comes together
I start to see you

~*~

liking what I see
knowing there is so much more
I take my sweet time

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2001-10-01 02:53 PM

Golly whoppers, SEA ... I am almost speechless ... almost

You have, again,inspired me and I will post all of this:

take your time with me
take anything you wish dear
I am yours to take

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