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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-29 05:52 PM

through tears
I smile
remembering
you
~SEA~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-29 05:59 PM

SEA!!! By my count that's only 6! Cool!

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2001-09-29 06:51 PM

a captured moment for sure

very good

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-29 07:14 PM

I think you got it, SEA!! Well done!! Never easy to let go of a lost love, but in time I think those memories will be cherished.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-09-29 11:15 PM

Yes, this say so much with so few words. I'm sure we all have loved ones that we remember in this way. Nice, Susan.

(((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-30 12:21 PM

Ah, you captured my feelings so well, and in so few words.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-09-30 06:51 AM

Great piece!!! That could be one powerful greeting card!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2001-09-30 08:01 AM

Dear Sea, so much said with so little words, our memories keep our loved ones alive within, cherish each one you have and the tears will slowly dry, you then will see a brighter tomorrow.

Great write.
Sincerely
Rick

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-30 08:02 AM

SEA~

In your remember
love lives~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-09-30 09:51 AM

Wow, pretty soon we are going to be at 2 or less. Have to love it! Memories are what I live on.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-09-30 10:22 AM

Sea,
You did well, enjoyed.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2001-09-30 12:41 PM

cool..this ditty sort of imprinted itself on my mind...

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