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Saunni
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0 posted 2001-09-29 03:09 PM






The Rest Is Mine

I remember when every step I made you were just one step behind
Both breathing peace within our own common land
You were but a thought away and so close that our minds could touch
Was no safer feeling than your fingertips resting in my hand...

Then one day my heart woke to find you painfully gone
Your missing face left me to wonder what I meant all along
Oh, the sky turned gray like it knew pain by the look in my eyes
All I kept replaying were your lips and your heartbreaking lies...

To what I thought was a promise for all my life
Soon found me way down here on my knees
You may have taken my will power to climb again to the top
But, the rest is mine for me to keep...

You may have given me life to take it back again
And, I may have thought you were my eternal friend
And, since you've taken my dignity for the very last time
I stand proud to say the rest is mine...

You may have taken my happiness and left it lie somewhere unknown
And, I still may go crazy with missing our past
Your absence may be as clear as if it were written in glass
But, you must know the rest is mine at last...

You may have taken my desire to fly like you and I used to
And, I may go insane when my memories take me back to you
Perhaps I will lie so lonely through the rest of my nights
But, believe me when I say the rest is mine for life...

You may have simply taken every physical part of me
I may never appear wearing a smile on my face
For all I have, the rest is mine, all mine
For it is my soul that you can never take...


@~~~>~~~>
Sauni


Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

© Copyright 2001 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-29 03:11 PM


Thats right...they can't take anything unless we let them...and then we are giving it away...James
Sven
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2 posted 2001-09-29 06:39 PM


no. . . they can't take that away from you. . .

powerful words my friend. . . well done. . .  

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-09-30 12:50 PM


For it is my soul that you can never take

Perfect ending. A lot of emotion here and you express it well

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-09-30 02:27 AM


Hello Saunni
May you continue to stand tall and proud as you have such a very precious soul.  May happiness be a big part of your life and may you find the love you surely deserve.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2001-09-30 03:23 AM


very inspiring! thank you greatly!
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