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0 posted 2001-09-29 02:34 PM


Unsure slow shuffling
With her head on my shoulder
When I fall in love

Arms and legs frailing
Wild gyrations on the floor
Pulsing tribal beat

Light hand on her back
Swaying with the slow rhythm
Close,but not too close

From across the room
She sits with all her girl friends
Will she say no thanks

Music time machine
Each song brings a memory
Oldies but goodies

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1 posted 2001-09-29 03:26 PM


"When I fall in love"...One of my favourite ones to slow dance to at that time.  
Oh, how you do bring back the memories!
"From across the room
She sits with all her girl friends
Will she say no thanks"
YES!! All the girls sat together on one side of the room...Do they still do this?  It must have been traumatic for the guy to walk across and ask for a dance not knowing if he would be rejected.
Keep these coming Paladin!  Enjoyed!  ~Nancy!


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

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2 posted 2001-09-29 04:02 PM



I am enjoying your rememories....

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