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SEA
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0 posted 2001-09-29 11:12 AM


Ever after let me down
When you said good-bye to me
I found tears are real
And not some fantasy

Forever is just a dream
A beautiful make believe
Cause in real life
People you love, really do leave

Friends do get left behind
Blows the fairy tales apart
Destroying the happy illusion
Of “Friends Forever”, I kept in my heart


~SEA~



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Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-29 11:14 AM


why is that???  I'm still trying to figure that one out. . .

well done. . . from the heart. . .

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2 posted 2001-09-29 11:35 AM



If it's friends you need, just look around
  Within the Passions, they abound
So remember never say "never"
  When considering Friends Forever.


[This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 09-29-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-09-29 11:41 AM


Sea,
Very nice write, I enjoyed.

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4 posted 2001-09-29 03:55 PM


Ah SEA...You sound so sad.  
I'll be your Forever Friend, if you want.  ~Hugs, Nancy~  


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-09-29 04:36 PM


Truth is reality...James
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6 posted 2001-09-29 04:46 PM


(((warm hugs)))

words straith from your heart, hope you are ok my friend.

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-09-29 05:23 PM


Oh SEA, there is so much truth on your words it makes my heart ache.  I'll never understand why it must be so.  Forever seems like a far fetched illusion at times.  Sigh.  Very well written, my friend.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 2001-09-29 05:31 PM


Sea, friends may come and go but the love we feel for them is constant. Lovely thoughts.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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Thank you dear friends, I am feeling kinda sad today. It's my friend's birthday, I called this morning and left a message....I will just have to try again later LOL at any rate it's all ok, and thank you  
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10 posted 2001-09-29 06:10 PM


your poem made me cry. i just moved and it summed up all that i have been feeling very well. that you for writing it and sharing it.
jennifer

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11 posted 2001-10-10 01:53 AM


I have to respond for my mothers sake.  They moved so much that she felt this pain too often.  But, once again, you expressed it so well.  Thanks SEA.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

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12 posted 2001-10-10 10:37 AM


liked it
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13 posted 2001-10-10 10:40 AM


I know what you mean Sea, but remember........we all will be your friend forever here at passions.  But you are right.....life does move on.  Oh sigh.......
Hugs sweet lady!  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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14 posted 2001-10-10 10:57 AM


How true.  Well done, gal.  Well done indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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15 posted 2001-10-10 09:59 PM


(((( Hugs to you)))))
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16 posted 2001-10-10 10:54 PM


This is so sad, but so true. I think everyone has felt like this at least once in their lives

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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