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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-09-29 09:29 AM



caramel lips
covort chocolate
fingertips
into
caressing
creamy contours


© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-09-29 09:48 AM


whoa baby...bring on the Hershey kisses...
woohoo this melts in your mouth and in your hands...
very nice SK ...

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

SmartChick
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2 posted 2001-09-29 10:56 AM


Very good.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-09-29 02:56 PM


Did someone mention caramel lips and hershey kisses...I could use a few hours of this...James
Topheth
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4 posted 2001-09-29 03:01 PM


Whoo-whoo!
MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-09-29 03:01 PM


Yes please.  

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

SEA
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6 posted 2001-09-29 06:03 PM


dang, now I need something sweet.........
Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 2001-09-29 06:46 PM


I'll buy one ... do you deliver?

excellent

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
8 posted 2001-09-29 11:58 PM



JM~  Ahh...a chocolate lover you're my kind of gal

SmartChick~ thanks a bunch  

James~ hehe, couldn't we all?    thanks for stopping in!

Topheth~ hehe    glad to see you enjoyed this!

Mark~ hehe, I'm happy to see you are infact a chocolate fan  

SEA~ I hope you found something  

Rex~ hehe   unfortunately this isn't something I can package for you and send...I've got some Hershey's kisses somewhere, want one of those?  

Thanks for reading!  Hugs to all


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Sinister Handed
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since 2001-08-05
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9 posted 2001-09-30 12:00 PM


I'm gonna get cavities because of you, but I'm not gonna complain.  
Your words here are quite delicious indeed.


Love you!

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
10 posted 2001-09-30 12:11 PM



hehe, bring on the cavities then my sweet  
I thought you'd like this one  

Love you  

Tracey
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11 posted 2001-09-30 12:28 PM


As I read this, I'm eating a bar of chocolate and caressing it into creamy contours in my mouth. And it's very yummy  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2001-09-30 12:52 PM



Yummy indeed!   I don't suppose you could spare a bite?  

VAS
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13 posted 2001-09-30 06:54 AM


yummy yummy luscious!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

kaile
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14 posted 2001-09-30 12:53 PM


the title seemed way promising and this is way HOT!...

don't entice me though..i probably have eaten more chocolates in my lifetime than i should.

cpalmer
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15 posted 2001-09-30 01:05 PM


Makes me really hungry! I love it!
Cindi

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