Fragile Heart Attempted acrostic :)

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-29 07:42 AM

*Feeling somewhat breakable
*Reaching out
*Another time to you
*Go with my heart
*In spite of the past
*Love can prevail
*Elevated hopes

*Hottest passion
*Endless desire
*Amor of the Gods
*Risking more pain
*Trusting you again

Fragile Heart back in your hands
Please don't break it

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-09-29 09:35 AM

attempted and accomplished

perfect Cat...
and those last two lines sum it all up with sincerety....well done

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-09-29 09:37 AM

Catalina~ A perfect acrostic

Nicely expressed!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2001-09-29 10:58 AM

This is excellent.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-29 10:59 AM

one can only hope. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-09-29 11:23 AM

A style I'll have to research... May fragile hearts be revered.

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-09-29 11:44 AM

Cat,
Well done, enjoyed

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-29 07:42 PM

Well done, I hope it all works out for you. Taking that chance again is never easy.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-29 07:47 PM

Very well done!! I do hope it works out for the two of you this time.
~Hopeful hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2001-09-29 09:35 PM

catalinamoon - how well, how well one knows these words...

BC

Pixydust
Junior Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 36

10 posted 2001-09-29 09:46 PM

"Fragile Heart back in your hands
Please don't break it"

I hope you're heart is safe and in good hands. We all know how hard it is to let go and trust again after being hurt in the past. Best of luck! Great write!

Pixydust

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

11 posted 2001-09-29 11:00 PM

Ahhh, very well done, Sandra, and hopefully that fragile heart will not become bruised this time...very gentle smile

Auguste