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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-29 01:26 AM

Within A Dream

I write of worlds
I know not of
where every day
is continuous love
yet, it is a place
I see in sleep
I have tucked away
my dreams too deep
what has caused
this horrible mistake
that I feel so empty
when I’m awake
so much is vanishing
in this extreme
can’t live a life
within a dream

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-09-29 01:55 AM

SlickLady~ What a sad write...but so beautifully penned. May all your dreams come true!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-09-29 08:28 AM

Live every day to the fullest, Helen.
Don't take anything for granted. Life is what we make of it.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-29 08:51 AM

A retreat at a time of sorrow. Don't kick yourself. Your beauty is at hand. Just bring it to a sactuary out in the open until you are able to spread it more evenly throughout. Keep writing....you pen lovely awakenings.

Sincerely,
Regina

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-29 11:02 AM

that place exists within you. . . keep looking. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-09-29 11:26 AM

I hope all of your dreams come true. A sad poem. But, very well written.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-09-29 11:48 AM

Slick,
There are any answers to this question. Find one that suits you. Nice write.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-29 07:41 PM

My heart goes out to you, Helen. May you find the peace your heart seeks. Sad, but powerful write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-09-29 07:52 PM

Never give up dreaming.

Nice to meet you.

Warm smiles

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-09-30 01:10 AM

A sad write, but beautifully penned

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-09-30 11:00 AM

enjoy

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