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On A Tired Theme
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On A Tired Theme |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Lingers on for just a little too long. The wave of eyelashes from across a room, Is sometimes known only to those succeptible to such inner cravings. Have you ever listened to the banter of lovers, As they sit close over an early lunch? Kissing and softly speaking of each other, With that glint of play in their eyes? The spirit is infectious enough to ravish your heart, And put you on your knees to the call of the smiles then brushed on your skin. What sweet sin is this that I could love the ones who touch my heart? All of them bear some sweet curtain for me to hid behind. Is love so often ours to hold or are we love's to hold? Have you ever watched lovers smile at each other, And felt the infectious mood so much, That you had to share your mood with someone you cared for? Have you ever felt the delicious wrapping of someone's whispers around your heart, When you called to share the moment? Love is often noticed with great hands, That reach out and out Making the laughter come with the fluttering of passion. Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 09-28-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
What sweet sin is this that I could love the ones who touch my heart? Ahh, gentle one, it is not a sin to love, for the soul is made to love, all differently to different ones, a heart big enough to have love for all, in its different ways and thoughts...it is only your sweetness projecting above the plain to extend out a loving hand..very gentle smile |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love is contagious. I love, love and your poem. |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Yes, I've noticed and have shared in the sensations of these feelings you so eloquently describe. I wish to feel them more. Excellent, my friend.  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a tired theme?? not quite. . . and the hands of love reach and touch all. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this, loved it! These lines are so true, and I bet a lot of people have felt this, and acted upon it  ...Have you ever watched lovers smile at each other, And felt the infectious mood so much, That you had to share your mood with someone you cared for? ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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