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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-09-28 09:17 PM



Capture.

Capture the heart of hunger and pain
Feel for only a moment the strain
The lost endure as they survive

Capture the sadness of the child
Cast aside for a few seconds
Your happiness, try to understand
Why the sadness, why the loneliness

Capture the butterfly, fallen
Hold it in your hand
Its wing you should mend
For if it flies again

You have captured an image
Releasing the oppressed from rage
Allowing smiles to gain momentum
Helped a child to regain freedom
On the wings of a butterfly

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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1 posted 2001-09-28 09:35 PM


DJD~ very gently done  
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2 posted 2001-09-29 04:36 AM


JD~
Quite nice~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-09-30 01:53 PM


captured, yet free. . .

a powerful image here. . . well done. . .

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MyEnchanted_Melody
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4 posted 2001-09-30 02:02 PM




Yes.....
Capture them all
and set them free
for that how it would be


A powerful write.....I really enjoyed it.

Thank you
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5 posted 2001-09-30 02:03 PM


I love the images here. Excellent poem, much enjoyed.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-09-30 02:13 PM


this powerful and beautiful...this would also make a great song.....very good work.....Daniel....I really like this!

Nathan

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7 posted 2001-09-30 03:13 PM


nice work, Daniel.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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8 posted 2001-09-30 05:43 PM


enjoy
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9 posted 2001-09-30 06:59 PM


Tender, yet powerful Daniel ... very nicely written.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2001-09-30 09:36 PM


And you have captured the feeling very well in this piece. Very well done

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11 posted 2001-10-05 11:51 AM


glad that I captured this beauty!!!!

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