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Alan
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0 posted 2001-09-28 08:58 PM


Hearts on fire
Feeds a minds desires
Gentle caresses
Feeds the fire


Life is short
Death is forever
Let me take you to a resort
And have some indoor sports

Bet you can’t tell
What’s on my mind
Right now I’m under your spell


alan

[This message has been edited by Alan (edited 09-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-09-28 09:13 PM


I see the way
your mind is turning
you've got that inner
fire burning

~*~


warming up
my Friday night
with the sweetest
of delight


Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-28 09:18 PM


reading my mind
you may read something
you don't want to find

a hidden desire
of pleasures
in my souls fire

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3 posted 2001-09-28 09:27 PM


secrets kept
will any haunt
you should speak
of this want

~*~
tell the world
how you feel
how you want
a heart thats real


Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-28 09:43 PM


words sweet and true
as I hide my heart
so it won't be in view


i'll write a note
drop you a line
but my heart won't vote

for in a box
I put my heart
and hide in the rocks

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Gaia
5 posted 2001-09-28 09:52 PM


Heart hidden under locks
hiding even under rocks
with no secret passageway
or magical key
visible


Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-28 10:00 PM


there i shall stay
only in the moonlight
shall I come out to play

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-09-28 10:01 PM


Alan and SEA:  I bequeath you two with a smile of approval for pushing my "TWENTY OR LESS..." form forward.    Keep it fresh and have fun!!  

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

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8 posted 2001-09-28 10:32 PM


hidden in the rocks
is a treasure true
digging deep I'll find
the hidden heart in you

  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 09-28-2001).]

Enchantress
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9 posted 2001-09-28 11:17 PM


Alan and Sea!! You are both TOO COOL!!
Got me smilin' tonight you did.  Have fun.
~Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Dee
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10 posted 2001-09-28 11:31 PM


I love this twenty or less idea. Alan, you and Sea seem to have it down just right.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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11 posted 2001-09-28 11:33 PM


so alan I'm on iron man #3 how about you?! LOL I've reached silly my friend.........
Alan
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12 posted 2001-09-28 11:40 PM


Oh Dee
can't you see
just how much fun
this can be

Oh..sea..
I'm not into men
hehehe
but I do like women
a lot even when they are silly

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13 posted 2001-09-28 11:41 PM


oh then Alan
I'm for you
I'm silly
through and through


LOL

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