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0 posted 2001-09-28 08:20 PM




Touched By An Angel
By: Noah Eaton
5/5/01

Touched by an angel
The love of my life
Cleansing away my tears and fears
My true lovely wife

Lips melting into hers
Gently glued together in passion's heat
Residing into her sunshine
Into a happiness with no retreat

Shadowed in wings of enlightenment
Encapsulated with a nova glimmering divine
Showers of stars beading her body
Velvet heart beating against mine

My desires melting against her smooth body
Feeling her warm breath tingle me
Tasting the sweet sugar of her love, legs weakened in pleasant thoughts
Beginning a brand new day with my love eagerly

Fidelity worn in lovers knot
In the union of true lovers embrace
Renaissance of our dreams
Melting in love skiss, loves eternal gaze

Touched by an angel
The angel of my life
Loving her eternally
My true lovely wife



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-29 12:35 PM


Very sweet and heartfelt.
Great poem.

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2 posted 2001-09-29 12:41 PM



Noah~  This is so touching   Beautiful beautiful write sir.
Thanks for the smile  
Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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3 posted 2001-09-29 03:04 AM


Well Noah, that will sure get you under that mistletoe for sure, and a lucky lady she is too.  Very romantic and lovely.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

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4 posted 2001-09-30 02:29 AM


To be touched by an angel is a wonderful thing!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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5 posted 2001-10-05 10:36 AM


your love shines through every line.
Well done!!

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-10-05 10:38 AM


Noah - be sure you give this poem to that lucky gal of yours.  Women are truly wonderful, aren't they?
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7 posted 2001-11-03 09:57 PM


Fidelity worn in lovers knot
In the union of true lovers embrace

Wow!!!! This is so romantic!! ^.^

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8 posted 2001-11-03 11:47 PM


Noah, you are the angel that I am touched by! I am a feind for your poetry, I could read it all day it is so beautiful.
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