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0 posted 2001-09-28 03:49 PM


     

when Zeus of Olympus was just a small child
he was hidden away in the deep forest wild
cared for by a nymph, Melissa was her name
she did her job well, no harm to him came

now, feeding an Olympian takes patience and skill
so main courses were venison, seasoned with dill
washed down with water from the river in the glen
Zeus ate until he could no more, but then. . .

what to feed Zeus when he’s ready for dessert?
Melissa thought and thought until her head hurt
then, walking through the forest, what did she see?
a sweet, honey-filled comb, home to many bees

she brought down the hive with one wave of her hand
and it was eaten, by her growing little man
he liked it so much, that to really tell the truth
Zeus started to develop quite the sweet tooth

then it came to pass that Zeus was found one day
and Melissa was the one who was made to pay
for hiding her Zeus from the enemies of man
she was made a bug, and forced to crawl the land

later the Olympians would win their glorious fight
and they set about quickly to make things right
they couldn’t change Melissa to what she was before
but could they make her into something more?

Zeus remembered those many long years back
memories of honey, and how his lips would smack
so he changed Melissa into a honeybee
to make honey for him, and for us too, you see?

so when next you see a hive of busy bees
take a minute to remember my tale if you please
and when you hear them buzzing in the summer sky
stop and say, “Thank you, Melissa” as you walk by.

Note: Melissa was a nymph who took care of the child Zeus when he was being sought by Cronus.  She was eventually found and changed into a bug.  Zeus, taking pity on her, changed her into a honeybee.

Melissa was also the name of one of the High Priestesses of Diana in Ephesus and means "honeybee".  The buzz of the honeybee has also been referred to as "the Voice of the Goddess".


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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-29-2001).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-28 04:18 PM


Sven this must be part of the reason we call women honey...James
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2 posted 2001-09-28 07:49 PM



Woo hoo!!
I'm buzzing around with a big grin here, I'm one biased honeybee, I LOVE IT!  

Now everyone knows why many of my friends and family call me "Honeybee," hence my username  

Gosh, this is just wonderful, you tell the myth so well!

Yippee, I get to be a goddess?  who would've thunk it  


Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-09-28 08:03 PM


well, i've missed out on curretn events, so if there's something i need to know, someone please tell me.... otherwise, great write, sven, and an interesting way to insert a new myth into an ancient mythology.... reminds me why i started reading your work in the first place  
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4 posted 2001-09-28 08:21 PM


Oh, I like this a lot. You have been doing a lot of research on such interesting things.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-09-28 09:45 PM


You know, you have done an excellent job with this one, Sven Pen. I would say this is the best yet in your series!   Keep them coming!  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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6 posted 2001-09-28 09:57 PM


Oh, that lucky
Melissa!
A goddess
no less.

What a great story!

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7 posted 2001-09-28 09:58 PM


Love the poem, it's perfect.
Sven
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8 posted 2001-09-28 10:57 PM


James, I never thought of that. . . thank you my friend. . .

Melissa, this was really fun to do. . . I had never heard this story until I found it. . . and you mentioned it to me. . . so, thank you for the notes, and the inspiration. . .  

NCC, thank you for reading. . . just to bring you up to date, I've been doing a series of Goddesses of the world. . . and, while Melissa was never really a Goddess, I thought that the story was cool enough to put it in here. . . glad that you enjoyed it. . .

Sandra, thank you. . . the research has been half the fun of doing this. . .  

Temptress, thank you my friend. . . if you think that this is good, keep watching. . .  

Midnitesun, every woman is a Goddess. . . I've always felt that. . . thank you for reading. . .

walker, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

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9 posted 2001-09-28 11:40 PM


Sven, this is your best my dear, I read this out loud to my kids who are learning greek Mythology, they loved this, and so do I! You are awesome at this!! Please keep doing these  
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Sven~ If only all learning were this fun!  This was awesome Sven   I really enjoyed it.  Can't wait to read more!

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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11 posted 2001-09-29 02:18 AM


And I'm the one with the goddess book!  Your tales, epics, poems all based with Goddesses and myth far outshine anything I've read before.
As always waiting now for my daily Goddess fix thanks to the master penman himself...

Isis

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12 posted 2001-09-29 07:53 AM


Sven,

     What a wonderful story I'm so glad I finally stopped in.  I always loved your writing and you shine here.  And who more deserves to be called a Goddess then Melissa who gives us the gift of her amazing poetry I loved this

TaraB

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I knew Melybee would find this and love it! How clever of you!

[psst! Second stanza, fourth line, little error...bet you find it!]

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14 posted 2001-09-29 10:55 AM


SEA, thank you my friend. . . I'm glad that your kids liked it. . . I know that I'm learning a lot too!!  

Krista, learning can always be this fun. . . you just have to know how to do it!!  Thank you. . .  

Isis, believe me, I've been looking for those books as well . . .    thank you my friend. . . I'm glad that you're enjoying. . .

RP, thank you my friend. . . and I'm sure if anyone was more surprised by this it was indeed Melissa, and thanks to her again for the idea. . .

Sunshine, I knew that she couldn't miss it!!!  *and thanks for the heads-up, I found it!!*  

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Honeybee
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15 posted 2001-09-30 01:44 AM



*An un-biased BUMP!*  

Honeybee
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16 posted 2001-09-30 01:50 AM



to quote Sven:
"and, while Melissa was never really a goddess"  


oh, woe is me
I'm buzzing in misery
am I not sweet as honey?
I thought I WAS THE QUEEN BEE?!!
tee hee (hey, that rhymes too)  

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 09-30-2001).]

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17 posted 2001-09-30 02:03 PM


This is a brilliant poem, Sven... Imost certainly enjoyed reading it!
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18 posted 2001-10-01 11:48 AM


sven,

out of all the goddess
poetry i have read to date,
this is your best!  It's so
wonderful, and of course, it's
perfect for missy too

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